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下次3512和3555货物能否一起出，如可以，我将在6月10日派一个20尺的集装箱来提货

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提交时间:2009/5/18 14:59:00

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Could you deliver NO.3512 together with NO.3555 next time? If it is possible, I will send a TEU to pick them up on june 10th!~~~~

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2009/5/22 13:30:00

Could we deliver the parts 3512 and 3555 together next time?If yes,i will send a 20" container to pick up the goods on Jun,10th.

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2009/5/18 16:14:00

Would the goods of No 3512 and No 3555 be delivered together next time, if it could, I will arrange a 20-feet container to pick up on 10th of June.

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2009/5/18 16:12:00

机械译人

2009/5/19 12:30:00

You are right in saying that, but grammar mistakes sometimes will fail you in making your point. I did some grammar correcting.

QBR

2009/5/19 9:52:00

谢谢指点。但我想翻译一方面要义达，同时最好尊重原文的语气，把原作者的思维方式表达出来，不知对否？

机械译人

2009/5/19 1:21:00

It would be better if ....next time? If so,.....pick them up....

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