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一季、一寂

你们的报价与市价完全不符合也不现实。如果能降价%生意有望,否则我们只好向别处购买。
备注:不现实=not realistic
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提交时间:2009/1/12 17:33:00

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chee

Your offer is so unrealistic that it doesn’t accord with the current market price at all.The trade is available only if you drop the price by x%, otherwise we’ll make our purchase somewhere else.

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2009/1/20 16:08:00

天佑我才

Your pricing and market price is not completely out of line with reality. If the business is expected to price%, otherwise we have no alternative but to buy elsewhere

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2009/1/13 20:48:00

shirley0528

Your quotation is neither completely consistent to the market price nor realistic.Only if it could be reduced by %,the business would be dealed,otherwise,we have to buy from others.

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2009/1/13 10:27:00

有事您说话

Your unrealistic offer totally diverges from the market price. x percent off would be acceptable, otherwise we have to seek elsewhere.

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2009/1/13 8:48:00

飘飘云儿

According to the market price, your quote is completely neither standard nor realistic. If the price can be cut 5% off,it could (may) be done-otherwise, we have to purchase from other suppliers. 5是我自己加的数字,做个例子。 括号里的may可以做为前面could的替换。但是语气不一样,外国人讲究这个的,如果用may就说明降了价也有很大可能不做生意,慎用。

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2009/1/12 22:50:00

莎士比亚

According to the market price, your offer is not suitable nor realistic. We may do business with you if the price is down % or we will purchase from other places.

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2009/1/12 20:06:00

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