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小猫咪咪

他成为了一个守护神,专门用他手中的箭保护戒指的主人。
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提交时间:2008/10/30 20:13:00

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有事您说话

He served as a numen who specially protected the owner of the ring with his arrows in hands.

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2008/11/12 9:54:00

pixie

He became a patron saint,and especially to protect the master of the ring with the arrow in his hands.

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2008/10/31 9:11:00

joyce Lee

He became an eudemon,specailly protecting the master of the ring by the arrow in his hand.

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2008/10/31 8:27:00

之强

He became a guardian angel with a special mission to protect the ring master with his arrows. / He became a guardian angel with a special mission to protect the ring master with the arrows in his hands.

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2008/10/31 8:22:00

uufox

He then became a patron saint,who especially protected the master of the ring by his claymore in hands.

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2008/10/30 20:33:00

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