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电脑作为现代化的教学和娱乐工具已经被许多家长列入教育投资计划。

备注：这是文章“要不要给孩子买电脑”的第一句

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computer, as a modern instrument of teaching and entertainment, has been listed in education invest plan by many parents.

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2007/5/6 9:11:00

Computers, as the facility for teaching and recreation, have become a part of many parents'' investment plan on education.

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2007/4/27 16:19:00

As a modern tool for education and entertainment, computers have become part of many parents’ education investment plan.

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2007/4/26 10:59:00

As the means of modernized education and entertainment, computers have been listed in many parents'' investment programmes for education.

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2007/4/25 20:49:00

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2007/4/26 22:57:00

我觉得alianlife中的modernized还是modern好，因为modernized有使现代化的意思。而对之强的翻译基本每什么意见

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2007/4/26 10:02:00

Computers, as a means of modernized education and entertainment, have been included in many parents'' lists of education investment.

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2007/4/26 9:52:00

Computers, as a means of modernized education and entertainment, have been included in many parents'' lists of education investment.