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我公司新建厂房建设项目定于2009年8月30日中午在建设工地举行开工仪式。要求各部门主管及经理参加。
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提交时间:2009/8/3 7:09:00

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小棉鞋

Ground-breaking ceremony for the new facory buildings of our corporation is scheduled to hold on the constuction site at noon 30 Aug 2009. Heads and managers of various departments are required to be present.( 牛津高阶的日期表达有新变化 Aug 词条的例句是:31 Aug 1908 即31 在前, Aug 后不加点, 年月日之间无任何标点符号。)

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2009/8/3 9:41:00

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The ceremony of the commencement of work of the construction project of new plant of our company will be held at noon of August 30th. Managers and administrators of all divisions are requested to participate.

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2009/8/3 9:25:00

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小棉鞋

2009/8/3 10:40:00

这里宜用 ground-breaking ceremony, 或 cornerstone-laying ceremony, 另 participate 不太贴切。

淡然一笑

2009/8/3 10:07:00

the opening ceremony of our company’s new plant construction project is arranged to held at the working site at noon on august 30th,2009. And all departmental managers are required to participate in that!