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杨阿囡

通力集团通过精准物流管理将企业打理的有声有色,成为苏州市建筑业的领头企业。
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提交时间:2009/5/21 14:23:00

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winniexu

Tongli Group Company is a leading enterprise in the field of construction.It is renowned for its excellent logistics management. 物流管理:logistics management这种用法比 Physical Distribution Management 要普遍 而且没有必要逐字逐句翻译,用excellent这个词的话既可表示精准也可以表明其优秀。

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2009/5/21 22:26:00

magicfish

The Tongli association conducts the business dramatically through the Precision Logistics Management and becomes the leading enterprise of the construction business in Suzhou. 参考:精准农业:precision agriculture

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2009/5/21 15:22:00

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小溪小鱼

2009/5/23 21:07:00

By precision logistics management, Tongli Group performs well and has become a leading enterprise in construction sector in Suzhou.

winniexu

2009/5/22 13:28:00

谢谢一号译员提出的观点O(∩_∩)O~

magicfish

2009/5/22 8:53:00

二号译员的看法值得借鉴,但是excellent用名词是不是更符合语法一点呢?还有苏州没有提及