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柏油路面湿冷冷的,还闪烁着青、黄、红颜色的灯火。我们就在骑楼下躲雨,“谁教我们只带来一把小伞哪。”她微笑着说
备注:是一片名为“永远的蝴蝶”散文的,文中那个她为读者(其男友)过马路寄信,而死于车祸…而信的内容是作者写给他母亲告诉下个他们结婚。
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提交时间:2008/4/15 8:18:00

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moon princess

The asphalt road surface was so clammy, still gleaming with lamplights of blue, yellow and red colors that we had to take shelter from the rain under an arcade. "What we had only one small ambrella," she said with a smile.

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2008/4/15 10:44:00

feliz

The bituminous macadam surface which mirrored sparkling blue,yellow and red lamplight was so waterish that it made people feel cold.We stayed below the Qi building for rain outside,“Just bringing one small umbrella,that’s why we are here.”She smiled.

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2008/4/15 9:01:00

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