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alianlife

I am theft uplifting rush Of quiet in circled flight

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提交时间:2008/3/15 22:48:00

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ghghuuii

我是一只盘旋飞行的静静的鸟，忽而偷偷地直冲云霄。

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2008/3/19 15:36:00

freelance

I am the swift, uplifting rush 我是那凌空飞起 Of quiet birds in circling flight.静静盘旋的鸟

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2008/3/16 2:04:00

Cany

我是在偷窃时间，在圆形的行程中加速寂静的灯心草的燃烧。

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2008/3/15 23:26:00

freelance

2008/3/16 1:50:00

Do not stand at my grave and weep, I am not there, I do not sleep. (1) I am a thousand winds that blow. I am the diamond glint on snow. I am the sunlight on ripened grain. I am the gentle autumn rain. (2) When you wake in the morning hush, I am the swift, uplifting rush Of quiet birds in circling flight. I am the soft starlight at night. Do not stand at my grave and weep. I am not there, I do not sleep. (Do not stand at my grave and cry. I am not there, I did not die!) Text by Mary Frye

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