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lucialhx

以前受到谴责的出格的性行为与性关系，得到了理性化的甚至是浪漫化的解释。

备注：弗洛伊德思想

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提交时间:2008/3/10 9:48:00

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qiuye_ecl

sex intercourse and sex relation that are regarded unmoral and being blamed gain rational and romatic explation

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2008/3/10 20:45:00

coconutpalm

Deviant sexual behaviors and relationships which were traditonally condemned is being rationalized or even romanticized.

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2008/3/10 17:03:00

lenovel

Sexual behaviors and sexual relations that beyond the pale now obtain rational even romantic explanation whereas before what they received is upbraiding.

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2008/3/10 10:30:00

tt1018

2008/3/10 12:59:00

一楼的翻译很棒，一点意见，不太成熟，谨供商榷！ 1.that 去掉或改成 that are,因out of pale应为形容词，作表语或状语。 2.upbraiding此处用作名词吧，用upbraided被动是否亦可？ 3.将what they received is upbraiding放到前面改为 that is out of pale and upbraided before是否弱化了原文的意思？

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