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枫晨

从学校门口往右走第一个十字路口右转走到尽头

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提交时间:2007/9/8 9:46:00

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Turn right at the school gate, and take right turning at the first crossing, then walk straight to the end.

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2007/9/12 17:24:00

turn right after you get out of the school gate, and walk along the road untill you reach the first crossing, then turn right and walk down the road

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2007/9/11 17:30:00

Choose the right way(side) at the school gate,turn right at the first crossing,and then walk to the end. (楼上的翻译中，有一个问题，就是until和前面的不可持续动词相连用，似乎不妥）

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2007/9/8 11:08:00

Turn right at the school gate ,then turn right again at the first crossing until you reach the end of the road.

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2007/9/8 10:08:00