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主题： 翻译the colour of the night (因为不会翻是直译的恳请各位大虾指点）或翻译谢谢 [] |
 发表于 2005/6/28 9:01:00
The colour of the night 夜色 You and I moving in the dark 你和我在黑夜中移动 Bodies close but souls apart 彼此靠近灵魂却彼此远离 shadowed smiles and secrets unrevealed微笑微尾随着秘密被隐藏 I need to know the way you feel我想知道你感知的方式 *now I will give you* everything I am 现在我将给你我所有 And everything I want to be和所有我所想的 [I will put it in your hands我将它放入你手中 If you could open up to me] 如果你愿意对我敞开心扉 Oh can`t we ever gets beyond this wall为何我们不能超越这所高墙 Cause all I want is just once to see you in the light因为我所想的仅仅是在黑夜里能见上你一面 but you hide behind the colour of the night 但你总躲在黑夜的角落中 I can`t the all learning from the past 我不能从过往的事中领悟全部 Love has told where is smiles有微笑的地方就被告知存在爱情 Now I can`t like rain现在我不能化作雨 I am telling me the blaming all on you 我告诉自己全部的责任都在于你自己 (And I`m lost)-gods save me…我迷了路—上帝啊救救我吧 Forever and again I`m waiting for you,I`m standing in the light 至始至终我都在等你，我一直都站在黑夜中 But you hide behind the colour of the night但你总躲在夜色后面 Pleae come out from the colour of the night请从夜色中出现吧
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 Re. 发表于2005/7/8 12:37:00The colour of the night 夜色 You and I moving in the dark 我们在黑夜中漫步 Bodies close but souls apart 彼此靠近灵魂却彼此远离 shadowed smiles and secrets unrevealed微笑和秘密都隐藏着， I need to know the way you feel我需要知道你所寻找的方向， *now I will give you* everything I am 现在我将给你我所有 And everything I want to be和所有我所想到的 [I will put it in your hands我将它放入你手中 If you could open up to me] 如果你愿意对我敞开心扉 Oh can`t we ever gets beyond this wall为何我们不能超越这所高墙 Cause all I want is just once to see you in the light因为我所想的仅仅是在黑夜里能见上你一面 but you hide behind the colour of the night 但你把自己隐藏在黑夜里 I can`t the all learning from the past 我不能从过往的事中领悟全部 Love has told where is smiles有爱才有笑容 Now I can`t like rain现在我不喜欢雨了， I am telling me the blaming all on you 我告诉自己全部的责任都在于你自己 (And I`m lost)-gods save me…我迷失了自己—上帝啊救救我吧 Forever and again I`m waiting for you,I`m standing in the light 至始至终我都在等你，我一直都站在黑夜中 But you hide behind the colour of the night可你总是把自己隐藏在黑夜中 Pleae come out from the colour of the night请从夜色中走出来吧
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| Re. 发表于2005/7/15 12:13:00 The colour of the night 夜色 You and I moving in the dark 你我在黑暗中游移 Bodies close but souls apart 身体靠近灵魂却远离 shadowed smiles and secrets unrevealed阴影笼罩下的微笑和未被揭穿的秘密 I need to know the way you feel我需要知道你的感受 *now I will give you* everything I am 现在我将给你我所有 And everything I want to be和一切我所想 [I will put it in your hands我会将它放入你手中 If you could open up to me] 如果你愿意对我敞开心扉 Oh can`t we ever gets beyond this wall为何我们不能逾越这面墙 Cause all I want is just once to see you in the light 因为我只是想在光亮里见过你 but you hide behind the colour of the night 但你总隐身在夜色里 I can`t the all learning from the past 我无法控制自己。 Love has told where is smiles过往的一切告诉我，那微笑曾宣告爱情到来过 Now I can`t like rain现在我泪如雨下，无法控制自己。 I am telling me the blaming all on you 我告诉自己，一切都怪你 (And I`m lost)-gods save me…我好迷茫—神啊，救救我吧 Forever and again I`m waiting for you,I`m standing in the light 我一直并且又一次的等着你，我一直站在这光亮里 But you hide behind the colour of the night但你总隐身在夜色里 Pleae come out from the colour of the night请走出夜色吧
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| Re. 发表于2005/7/16 10:22:00 you and I moving in the dark 你我在黑暗中漫步 bodies close but souls apart 貌合神离 shadowed smiles and secrets unrevealed 隐藏的微笑而你始终把秘密深藏 i need to know the way you feel 我渴望了解你的感受 now i''''ll give you everything i am and everything i want to be 我将给予你我的全部 i''''ll put it in your hands 我将会把自己交给你 if you could open up to me 只要你能对我敞开心扉 oh can''''t we ever get beyond this wall 难道我们始终无法逾越那道鸿沟吗 ''''cause all i want is just once to see you in the light 我所渴求的仅仅是你我能坦诚相对 but you hide behind the color of the night 但你却将灵魂隐藏于无穷的夜幕中 i can''''t the all learning from the past (好象是go on running from the past) 我不愿在回忆中沉沦 love has torn away this mask and now like clouds, like rain 爱情已从你的不坦诚中转身离去，如今如烟雨飘零 i''''m drowning and i blame it all on you 我沦陷于爱情的泥沼中不能自拔，这一切都是你的错 i''''m lost, god save me 我已迷失，谁能救救我 cause all i want is just once ，forever and again 我仅仅渴望能再有一次和你到老的机会 i''''m waiting for you, i''''m standing in the light 我敞开心扉等你归来 but you hide behind the color of the night 而你却始终有所保留 please come out from the color of the night 请你对我敞开心扉吧！ 呵呵，舒心姐姐提供的英文歌曲和我所知道的有些出入
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| Re. 发表于2005/7/18 11:08:00 意见：love has torn away the mask应该是爱情已经撕下了面具之意。 I can't go on running from the past应该是我一直无法摆脱往昔之意。 英文歌曲意译一般更顺，赞同楼上的翻译方式。
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